The Forgotten Who Still Remembers, by Elusith
This story came third in our line-up for stories that placed during the contest, and I like to think it deserved that placement. It's an easy story to read, at least, since it's writing is pretty decent. Nothing bad jumps out at me, and the spelling and grammar is adequate. It was a solid read, at least.
There's not much to say about this one. At one chapter in it barely makes it past 1K words, and there simply isn't enough of the story for it to be satisfying. It's not even anachronistic as of yet, since only one scene was written, and that scene was told within chronological order.
Since I've read all the stories and got my notes firmly on a gdoc in front of me, I'm going to launch those reviews I promised tonight. Because I happened to like this one, I decided to start with Constellations.
Hello. I know this is getting posted on the Hazardous Writing Materials and Challenges group as well, but since I'd like for as many people to give both the stories and the group a look, I'm posting the contest results on my personal blog as well. It was a fun contest, and the participants deserve to get looked at by strangers. Creepily.
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